Mood/Made/Flow/Forged Line writing, must I feel like verse, For words and poems to form? Or is it when I’m feeling worse, They come but have no chorm? When brow sweat browbeats words in shape ‘Cause heart song does not sing Do birds take flight and chimps go ape As wrenched rhyme-bells wring? When lines are built by block and brick And not by poet flow Do they still soothe souls that are sick? Does anybody no? Is water pumped as pure and cool As water from a well That slakes the thirst of any fool In palace or in sell? They seem to me to be as sweet As cakes or chocolate pie. And if the reader says they treat, Then who am I to lye? © Dennis Lange and thebardonthehill.wordpress.com, 2011.
Mood/Made/Flow/Forged by Dennis Lange
August 22, 2011 by thebardonthehill
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Love it!
LOL…okay I really like this. Excellent play on words!
Very good.
Very communicative post!
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