Venus reflected in the Pacific Ocean (Photo credit:Brocken Inaglory via Wikipedia)
Trying To Trick Me
Bright, bright star
I know what you are -
NOT a star.
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Tonight’s first
Star that I can see –
A planet!
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Do you move?
If so, you’re merely
An airplane.
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How can I
Wish upon a star?
It’s tricky.
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* The haiku I write are lines of 3-5-3 syllables instead of 5-7-5.
See Haiku article here for explanation, if needed:
http://thebardonthehill.wordpress.com/2011/08/08/haiku/
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© Dennis Lange and thebardonthehill.wordpress.com, 2012.
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS! It has definitely started my day off with laughter.
I aim to please.
Okay … now THIS ONE is my favorite! Or … maybe … but then … there’s also …
Just too many good ones to choose from.
Sometimes it IS tricky, isn’t it?
That last one really does something for the ones before it. I like it.
Thanks. I had written the three earlier as a group and decided to post them yesterday. I looked at them and then wrote the last one just before I published them all.
nice…