In innocence, the night began,
…Like most of nights, by far.
But shortly after Sun had set
…Two brutes raised heads to war.
The pig cloud and the dog tree were
…Outlines against the sky.
The fun began when lightning leapt
…And struck the pig cloud’s eye.
The pig blinked not, but winked a bit,
…And said it was a grin
He’d flashed across the evening.
…His lie, not he, was thin.
He laughed as if it tickled him.
…He snorted loud and roared
From rumblings deep within his bowels.
…He was, and was not, boared.
The dog tree bobbed his head and howled,
…As pig cloud belched the wind.
Dog’s boughing neck and branching legs
…Did rub and creak and bend.
Dog would have wagged his tail at Pig –
…The problem, I suppose,
Was that his tail was rooted deep
…Beside a rising rose.
Instead, he tossed his head about
…To watch as Pig approached.
And would he run away with Pig?
…The subject was not broached.
The whipping wind ripped some of Dog –
…The eyes, ears, nose, and throat.
The pig cloud cried to see his plight,
…Enough to fill a boat.
But dog trees grow more playful when
…A pig cloud comes to call.
And so the dog tree barked and jumped,
…And joined in the brawl.
Like dinosaurs they thrashed about,
…Like monsters in the deep;
They raged and stormed most of the night,
…So no one else could sleep.
Before the dawn could shine upon
…Their comic-tragic end,
The pig had rained himself away,
…And dog had lost to wind.
That night was such that folks would say,
…“Not fit for man nor beast.”
But Pig of Cloud and Dog of Tree
…Had fun, to say the least.
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© Dennis Lange and thebardonthehill.wordpress.com, 2011.
How fun! Had to read it twice for twice the fun!
Ha! What a creative take on a storm. This would make a great illustrated kid’s book that adults would love as well!
Thanks. I’d had that thought recently because of another poem I’m writing that I suddenly realized might have the making of an illustrated book for children. Might have to look for an artist one of these days. 🙂
Excellent; it is a rare and enjoyable read!
Oh, I absolutely enjoyed reading this! 🙂
Thanks!
Reminds me of The Duel by Eugene Field–loved the pun on boar and the whimsical style 🙂
Thanks. I sometimes get in one of those moods. 🙂
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Dennis, this was totally delightful! I love the playful imagery of the dog tree and pig cloud creating (and cavorting through) the storm. Awesome! ~ Julie 🙂
Thanks! Sometimes my whimsical mood just overwhelms me and I can’t help it. 🙂
Absolutely charming, Dennis! Witty and playful and evocative as a classic children’s book. Wonderful.
Thank you! I think my Muse had a bit of Cat of Nip at the time. 🙂