September Snow
It’s Bastrop, Texas, where the Lost Pines grow –
Strays, stragglers, orphaned by none that we know,
But huddled, hold together, flourish well;
Draw men to verdant beauty’s midst to dwell.
In Bastrop County where the Lost Pines grow
September brought warm flakes of falling snow;
A sooty storm of sullen ashes fell
And drifted downward from a fiery hell.
In burning Bastrop where the Lost Pines grow,
The houses burned, and tears, like rivers, flow
For charred remains that look like blackened toast,
For loss and loved ones who gave up the ghost.
In burned out Bastrop where the Lost Pines grew,
The fire, like Sherman, ruthless, marching through,
Spared not the pines, the park carved by the state,
But left black sticks still standing tall and straight.
In Bastrop where the Lost Pines now are lost
With dreams and homes and lives, an awful cost,
There is a moment brief, while embers cool,
Like waiting for the bell to start to school.
Because, in Bastrop the Lost Pines will grow,
And from the ashes, green shoots quickly show
And rise again as orphans raised by God
Where they have lived for years on Texas sod.
Before, in Bastrop, the Lost Pines e’en grow,
Those Texans with the heart of Alamo
Will wipe the black and tears from off their face,
Build new with jutted jaw and with God’s grace.
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Link to pictures of the Lost Pines State Park:
http://www.friendsoflostpines.org/id5.html
Link to pictures of the September fire:
http://galleries.statesman.com/gallery/week-devastating-wildfires-091111/#225498
Photo courtesy of The Bastrop Advertiser.
© Dennis Lange and thebardonthehill.wordpress.com, 2011.
I subscribe to one of Australia’s most prestigious (so I’m told) literary magazines but I seldom see poetry in that magazine approaching this standard (in my opinion). Of course it is almost all free verse and much of it very convoluted and obscure and I’ve given up trying to get published there. I enjoyed this poem very much.
Thanks very much. Regarding being published by literary journals – it’s as if they’re a blind closed circle that disregards all poetry other than their own prose and can’t see that theirs is rejected by all except that small, knit circle.
First I enjoyed your poem, told a story well. I have been watching on the news in California about the terrible fires throughout Texas. We had bad fires here last year. There are some small ones now but nothing like TX. I also have noticed ALOT of free verse and am confused by it. Seems sometimes like they are text messages. Still trying to understand it. Have a great day.
I enjoyed this Dennis, I like the repetition of
In Bastrop where the Lost Pines Grow…
that subtly changes with each stanza.
I am off to investigate them now. Thank you
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