The Waiting Ones
The ship that sailed like summer sailed,
Like sun drops out of sight,
Has not returned, though many months
Have passed as restless night.
There is no news of its bold crew,
Though on the beach we stand
Like palm trees fastened by their roots –
Though we by love’s strong hand.
The ocean ends in distant line,
Horizon’s veil for eyes
That would have stayed on ship’s tall sail
If it were otherwise.
By day, we work; we tend the home;
The children learn and play.
But like a sentinel on watch,
We eye the empty bay.
At night, the sea wind softly sighs;
The waves break on the shore.
And if we wake, we turn to take
A look for lights once more.
We knew the need; we recognized
That this lot had to be.
But waiting’s not made easier
By studied urgency.
The ship may be beset by storms;
The crew may suffer thirst;
A foe may suddenly appear;
By calm, ship could be cursed.
But if their weather’s foul or fair,
Ours is a gloomy sky
That hangs low on us like a weight
As days go slowly by.
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photo by Janet Beasley at http://www.rgbstock.com/photo/mXpqXKs/Sunsets
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© Dennis Lange and thebardonthehill.wordpress.com, 2013.
This is far and away my favourite one written by you that I have read.
Thanks. Glad you liked it!
One of your best poems I feel – difficult to pick my favourite stanza, perhaps number 5.
Thanks. I always wonder about my own favorites, if they’ll be liked as well by others.
Excellent poem, Dennis. I have been catching up and haven’t left comments as much as I like, but I always enjoy your posts and apologize for the gaps in my visits. Diane
Hi – this is Janet Beasley, the one with the photo. What a beautiful poem! I’m honored to see it next to such an amazing artistry of words. So happy my photo could bring inspiration. I too am an author. I write inspirational epic fantasy adventures. Photographing scenic nature is my second passion. I wanted to let you know if you like that photo and are looking for newer ones, you will find them on my new site (all FREE to download and use on your blog, website, business cards, etc.) at http://www.flickr.com/photos/janetbeasley/ If you’re interested in checking out my novel series, I’d like to personally invite you to visit http://www.HiddenEarthSeries.com And if you’re interested in being featured on the JLB Creatives Blog as an author, hop on over and check out http://www.JLBCreatives.Blogspot.com Again, thanks so much for choosing a JLB Creatives photo, always glad to bring a smile. Here’s wishing you a stellar week! ~Janet~