Cold Hurts
I fin’lly found the reason why
It is not heat or wet or dry,
Or windy weather that I hate –
It’s cold that I’d eliminate.
It bothers me like needle pricks,
Like being beaten by some sticks;
It shivers me like spirits, spooks,
In icy rivers, frozen nukes.
Old Winter meets me face to face
With his cold breath, without a grace.
He grabs my ears with frigid hand,
And holds them till I cannot stand.
He numbs my nose; he frosts my feet;
He makes my toes mere slabs of meat;
He fills my hands with aches and pains,
And when he’s bad, befuddles brains.
Cold is a blight to man and beast,
To those who starve, to those who feast.
It is not bias that averts –
The reason why is that cold hurts.
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© Dennis Lange and thebardonthehill.wordpress.com, 2013.
great imagery and i sincerely enjoy the rhythm. thank you for sharing this delightful treat!
Thank you! Thanks for reading.
Cold hurts, yes it does. Thank you for another of your musical poems…
Thanks!
Very nice, Dennis, and I think you’ll have quite a few people agreeing with you — especially this winter.
Thanks. Yes, a large numbrrr would agree with me. 🙂
Cold is certainly hurting us in the UK at the moment – I agree with every word of your excellent poem
I’d have to look back to see what month I wrote that, but it was 77 degrees here in Texas this afternoon. I’ve seen the cold across Canada and the upper U.S. I don’t think I could live in that. Didn’t catch the UK weather, but I can imagine. 😦 Thanks for your comment about the poem.
Well written – I’ve never felt real cold and have only seen snow first hand once (only 6 years ago in Ireland) but from what I have experienced I can’t imagine living with it for any length of time.
I don’t think I could live in the northern U.S. Our winters in Texas aren’t severe. Yesterday, the high was 74 F. A cold front came through and the high today will be about 60, 30 tomorrow morning. It may get down into the teens a couple of times during each winter. I had an alternate ending that I pondered for a while – something about hating the cold, but maybe I’m just growing old. 🙂