The Rain Falls On The Hill Above
The rain falls on the hill above,
And some runs through my yard,
Across my driveway, and then down
The sloped road, rushing hard.
In silver streams and waterfalls
And rapid, churning foam,
It charges to the creek below,
Like students hurry home.
The creek, flushed with the rushing flow,
Swims faster to its friend,
And joins the river’s swollen surge –
And they, together, wend.
The river rages, current swift,
Filled with ferocity,
And down the sloping country runs
And follows land to sea.
The sun beams on the ocean’s face
To see the water there,
And sea sighs with a moistened breath
That rises in the air.
And in between the sun and sea,
Their offspring rise and grow –
At first a little tad, then more –
Oh, children blossom so!
The wind, a nursemaid, sends them out
Across the land to play.
Then, some come to my hill and house,
Make night from brightest day.
They flash a smile, then loudly shout;
Their booming rattles panes,
And rumbles in the sky above
Like bowling pins in lanes.
Then, rain falls on the hill above,
And some runs through my yard,
Across my driveway, and then down
The sloped road, rushing hard.
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Eccl.1:7 All the rivers flow into the sea,
Yet the sea is not full.
To the place where the rivers flow,
There they flow again.
(written by Solomon about 940 B.C.)
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© Dennis Lange and thebardonthehill.wordpress.com, 2013.
Dennis, this is absolutely delightful. You move the elements of nature through the various stages so smoothly and seamlessly, and the imagery and figurative language are excellent. I honestly think this may be one of your very BEST works.
Thanks! I may have said this before but as soon as I finish writing a poem, I categorize it from 3 to 1 (1 being the best) in regard to how good I think it is out of all those I write. In that Excel file, I categorized this one as a 2. But as I was posting it and rereading it, I appreciated it a bit more and considered going to the file and reclassifying it as a 1. So, I’m glad you said what you did, confirming my new thoughts about it.
Yes, I agree with Sandra, very well written indeed.
Thank you! It’s one of those I was pleased with when I finished. Do you have that feeling about some, and not about others that you write?
Yes but there are very few that I am really pleased with I have to admit.