An excellent, well written piece!
A poem of very high quality.
This one is definitely one of my all-time favorites!
How fun! Had to read it twice for twice the fun!
Ha! What a creative take on a storm. This would make a great illustrated kid’s book that adults would love as well!
Excellent; it is a rare and enjoyable read!
Oh, I absolutely enjoyed reading this!
This is so powerful–and I love the way you formatted it.
LOL…okay I really like this. Excellent play on words!
Wonderful as always!
Beautiful and compelling. Your comparison in the third stanza is brilliant.
Those lines are great. Bravo.
The pacing, balance and form of your lines are flawless, a quality piece.
I really liked this one!
Just read this again, it’s very good and I particularly like that last stanza – wisdom.
REALLY outstanding. Beautifully done, Dennis. Thoughtful, gentle but pointed. Marvelously rhythmic. Great stuff.
This is a beautiful poem, spare and elegant.
I adore this poem. Calming, rhythmic, and simply beautiful!
I’ll be adding to this as time goes on.