Dancing With The Stars
The pair, debonair, with a flair
make their case.
The grace! and the pace! as they chase
the sweet notes;
Pair floats, two dreamboats – Ah! the quotes
from the crowd.
Chins proud as they wowed and then bowed
at the end.
Compare, if we dare, such a rare blend.
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photo by Moi Cody at http://www.rgbstock.com/photo/meSMtfY/Tango+4+Silhouette
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© Dennis Lange and thebardonthehill.wordpress.com, 2013.
Neat rhyme scheme, Dennis. Very fresh and exhilarating.
Thanks. Experimenting is fun. 🙂
As always, entertaining rhythm, this time not by any particular rule or school; good writing & rhyming. Thank you, again, for being here on WordPress…
Thanks for all you said! I tried for a rhythm that was like a dance couple taking a step, quick pause, and then another quick step.
You got just the rhythm you suggested to Lindy Lee; it has a quickstep character to it that, if you pushed it up to an even faster pace, would make a rather nifty alternative kind of rap!