Worlds Meet
Line of sand,
The swell of ocean,
Swell of land.
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Layers of Wonder
A flower;
Beauty on beauty;
A flyer.
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* The haiku I write are lines of 3-5-3 syllables instead of 5-7-5.
See Haiku article here for explanation, if needed:
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© Dennis Lange and thebardonthehill.wordpress.com, 2012.
Very nice. The second one, especially, is so pretty. I have been swamped at work again, with no extra time to surf the blogs and read, so I haven’t tried to find your “double-meaning” poem yet. But I’ll get there.
I wrote both of these looking at the picture of each. And I’ve written some more that way, as well.
I love: ‘swell of ocean, swell of land’ and in the second one: ‘beauty on beauty’ … sometimes, in writing, repetition is annoying, and others, like here, it is quite lovely.
Thanks. When it’s done right, I think it’s another needed element of poetry.
Excellent natural beauty haiku; pictures perfect…
Thank you!
Both very good bard.
Thanks!
A perfect pairing–love both. 🙂
Thanks very much!