Not!
I’m certain
If you look closely,
There’s Jesus!
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Our Elephants Ride
A rare sign.
I never see this
In Texas.
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Guilt Lingers
Blood-stained hands
Will wash, but will leave
Blood-stained mind.
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Not – photo by Adrian van Leen at
http://www.rgbstock.com/photo/n7Untiw/wall+stains
Elephants – photo by Adrian van Leen at
http://www.rgbstock.com/photo/ndS3Byi/elephant+walk+warning
Guilt – photo by Dez Pain at
http://www.rgbstock.com/photo/nbvwcHa/Victim
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* The haiku I write are lines of 3-5-3 syllables instead of 5-7-5.
See Haiku article here for explanation, if needed: https://thebardonthehill.wordpress.com/2011/08/08/haiku/
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© Dennis Lange and thebardonthehill.wordpress.com, 2014.
I like the blood stained haiku, although the 5-7-5 syllable count seems it would better these. Just a friendly suggestion 🙂
~M
Thanks. I’m probably too far gone in my 3-5-3 haiku habit to change. 🙂 I’ll probably stick with it through faithfulness to what is said to be closer in English to the syllable count in Japanese. I am tempted at times to write 5-7-5 as I attempt some haiku, though. It would certainly increase the flexibility of what I wanted to say. Again, thanks for reading and thanks for the comment.
I’ve hit a kangaroo with my car but so far have avoided elephants. And yes, that is quite clearly Jesus.
I thought it just had to be Him. I just glanced at the photo and knew He had to be there – somewhere.